Tuhinga Taki-Haro (Wk4)

Kia ora mai tātou!!

So this week we wrote a tuhinga taki (recount) about our visit to see Harold the giraffe in the Life Eduaction caravan.

Here are some photos of the students in their groups holding up their drafts and published copies:





Here is the pīpī teina group with their draft & published copies of their Harold stories


 

Here are some of the teina group with their stories about going to see Harold.





Mana & Piata from the tuakana group showing off their mahi




 

 

The following photos show Evanza's planning for her story, then her draft story and finally her published story.

This is the planning sheet that we the teina and tuakana writing groups use to plan our stories before we start writing them.





Once our planning has been checked off by the kaiako we go off and start writing our stories. We have to check for pū matua, ira kati, piko & all the other things that should be in our writing.

Then we publish our story on the rorohiko. We draw a picture on our publishing and then we're finished!!





 

We hope you enjoyed looking at our writing this week!! We will see you next week!!